Andrew Valentine (complete)

[andrewvalentine]

::Andrew Valentine::

Type:Original
Age:16
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Bisexual
Crushes:A bit on Mori and Haruhi
Face Claim:Miharu Rokujou from Nabari No Ou


Appearance:

Andrew is around 5'3 he is thin, He also has short black hair that can sometimes be a mess depending on the day. His eyes are dark green, he has a kind face that's also inviting but that's all appearance. He rarely smiles only when he is with his sister which can intimidate other guys who don't know them.

When not wearing the uniform he wears black jeans that can be baggy at the bottom, he also wears a shirt everyday a different color that usually the shirt would have buttons or writing on them. His shoes are sometimes high-tops sometimes not depends on how he wants it.

Personality:

Andrew seems nice and kind but once you get to know the real him hes aggressive and dark sometimes. He is truly nice and sincere to his sister, Alice, or people he can trust. He never usually smiles only with his sister when he can enjoy himself. When together with his sister they can be very destructive or sometimes mental. He has always been protective of his big sister anyone tries something on her he gets her and leaves but if things get physical he can get sometimes get out of control with only Alice to clam him down. When given loads of sugar he can go crazy sometimes he can blurt things out that only is known with in the family or just between Alice and himself. Things with their parents aren't the best for anyone so whenever they are with them he acts cold and detached especially with his mother. He can be very loyal to his sister or any of his few friends he has. He is very smart and clever especially with Alice they be very smart in destructive but can play with you Psychological and be very dangerous like before....

History:

Andrew's and Alice's life isn't the best but they try to make the best of it. Their parent weren't always their they were always with the maids but were mainly alone with just themselves. Their mother rarely comes to visit them along with their dad. 'Mother' comes only when she is lonely or has nothing better to do she hate to have any physical contact or any contact at all. 'Father' doesn't have the balls to come any other day but Christmas or their birthday because he was such a wimp both treated him coldly but 'father' favored Andrew better making him hate him even more because he treated Alice with less respect.

The family business is something Andrew hates and doesn't want to be in even with all the persuasion in the world he would never leave his sister to join the mafia. The reason why they're even rich is because the family is because the 'family business' gives money to all members of the family even those who aren't in it. Both Alice and Andrew have played psychologically with other but one time it turned to the worst they had had one maid who was always with them but the played their 'game' and the next day they found her dead she committed suicide. The event didn't traumatized but they don't play as much as they used to. After a few years they were both accepted to Ouran they paid everything from and everything was settled. The money was given from the 'family business' after the take over of another mobster. they met some of the hosts and became friends a little too quickly but they enjoy their company.....sometimes

Controller's Information

Nickname:Cristy
Age:13
Gender:female
Seen the Anime?:yes and loved
How Did You Find Us?:Friend recommended it

Sample RP:Both Alice and I are in math class both of us bored out of our minds but what could we do just leave when we please besides i'm the one who has to drag Alice here by force just to come to school. Soon the bell rang and both of us practically ran out of class to go to lunch. We left to the garden which is usually private and nobody goes especially when they can go gossip with everyone else in the cafeteria.

"What did you make for lunch" asked Alice

"I made some Tamagoyaki, Onigiri, u know the usual" I answered and she smiled at me i did the same.

"and for desert?" she asked hoping for something good.

"Your favorite pudding with chocolate" i answered and she was happier. She grabbed my arm and ran towards the garden "Lets GO!!!! i want My pudding!!!!" she yelled as we went faster and faster.

"Hai! Alice-nee" i agreed as my pace speed up.

We finally got to the garden after a bunch of screaming girls cam running through the halls Alice got madder the more she had to wait for her pudding. "Finally!" she announced when we sat down under a shady tree.

"Here" i handed her her lunch "Itadakimasu" we both said before eating. Alice seemed happier than usual.

"You seem happy" i said as she ate her onigiri she just nodded

"I found a nice music room its abandoned so we can use it after school" she said eating trying to avoid the bit of vegetables i gave her.

"Ok we go.." i said "YAY!!!" she shouted "...But if you eat your vegetables" i added and her cheering was silenced. Once she heard the word vegetables she pouted "...No" she said in a low voice

"Come on you eat or no music room" i threatened. She pouted even more, I grabbed a piece of lettuce and held her nose. She gasped for air and stuck in the piece inside her mouth. She had a disgusted face when she swallowed it.

"That wasn't so hard now was it" i said. "Meanie" she insulted me and i just smiled.

"Come on just one more and we go to the music room and.....you get...your PUDDING!" i announced but it didn't make much of a difference. She quickly grabbed the lettuce before i could and threw it on the ground.

"What vegetable" she said i didnt want to push it so i took out the pudding and she was ecstatic.

"PUDDING!" she grabbed it and took out her spoon and began to enjoy it as did I. After enjoying the last minutes of lunch we headed to History class making it much more boring for both of us.

After classes ended Alice began to happier and happier as we went up the stairs.

"Come on Andy! your taking too long" she shouted at me though i was beside her."hai hai nee" i said as walked faster.

"Here!!" she said showing me one of the bigger doors, i looked at the sign beside it. "Music room #3" I read. "Come on!" she opened the door and we were showered with red rose pedals followed with a chorus "Welcome"...

Note:Part I/Part II is with Alice Valentine

[Tamaki Suoh]

Hello Andrew and welcome for showing interest in Maybe You're My Love.

Unfortunately, I'm not sure that our site is a good fit for you. The trouble you had with the template was understandable, so I don't necessarily fault you for that. However, looking through your profile, I can see a lot of issues regarding setting up the character as well as the use of grammar and spelling in the profile that tell me you don't have much experience in roleplaying. While we're open to people of all experiences, our standards might be a bit to hard for you to keep up with as it is normally aimed towards more experienced players. I might suggest you a find a site that is more aimed at beginner's.

Still, don't want to leave you out in the cold, so I can still try and make suggestions for future reference. Always run your profiles through a spell and grammar check like on Word or so. Next, when it comes to personalities just listing a variety of traits isn't the best way to go about it. Instead, focus on maybe a few central traits, and then expand and discuss those traits, maybe with examples and explanations. For this character's case you have:

-Close relationship with his sister (were you going for the same sort of thing as Hikaru/Kaoru?)
-Cold but friendly if you get to know him (admittedly this is a really cliche kind of personality; you'll have to try and think of something new to do with this or maybe just scrap it?)
-Destructive psychologically and such (this might make it hard to interact with people, and more definition on what that actually means would be nice).

For history, what you should try and do for sites like this is to have a chronological history that features all the major events in their life up till the present. I also like discussing some non-important stuff too, to flesh out their life (like how they did in school and blah blah blah). You should also work on making sure the history is appropriate to the site and genre that you're applying for. In this case, Ouran is REALLY not the kind of setting where you're going to have the Mafia (Japan has the Yakuza as it's organized crime syndicate; always do your research) and suicides and such. Also. unless you have permission from the other people who play the character, don't involve other people's characters (this is referring to your final statement about being friends with the Host Club).

As I always suggest with profiles, when you're looking at a site try and look at some of the approved profiles to get an idea of what is expected and the standards of the site. If you already have a profile, compare what you have with what's approved.

Again, I thank you for showing interest in the site, but if this is your first time roleplaying, I'm really not sure that this site would be the best choice to do so.