Ootori Kyouya

[peach]

::Ootori Kyouya::

Type:*Canon*
Age:17
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Straght
Crushes: What it to you? It's none of your business, That’s Classified Information.
Face Claim:Ootori Kyouya

Appearance:

His hair was short and black like a min-night color. Kyouya like to dress and look more of the smart casual classy look.. His glasses shine when he planning something, mad, or frightened. Though one thing about his outfits they are all made by fashion designers.

He usually wear normal jeans and tops made by a designer when not school dress. The eyes are grey color which look brown kind of at times. Kyouya doesn't wear commoner made cheap clothes his has to be more money and more styling or to his liking. He may play a bad looking type money greed guy but he really sweet and caring just got to give him a chance.

Personality:

Determined and slightly sadistic, Kyouya is also tender and gentle, mostly for Tamaki, and he helps in the best manner he can to keep them distracted. He had been decoded from his hide behind of the idea of seeing the club as profit by his own actions.

His role is the "cool" type in the host club. He always shows himself as professional around even some of his less approved upon clients and his fellow host. He is not one to explode with joy unlike Tamaki when it comes to Haruhi, He tends to keep to himself.

Kyouya is logical and super intelligence. He can be detached and threatening at times.. He isn’t interested in anything that don't bring profit to him or interest. He calculating yet not greedy. He always like to move thing forward. He also love planning things or agree with people if it involve profit.

When you meet Kyouya you see him writing in his notebook or recording all the clubs activates also keep track of the host clubs financial ordeals.. When talking to him he is gracious, helpful and interesting but not overeager. His ways of hosting are to impress the girls with his knowledge and cool assurance.

He perfect for the role of a vice president, taking it upon himself to make the club experience pleasant as possible, whether it evolves direct activates, taking control. or making reparations. If you ask people they tell you he a immoral , power hungry monster behind his smile. He friendliness is a font as flawless and confident as a sell man.

He a brazen liar and will be smiling and courteous even when he hinting a threat. If it is needed he know how to put and steel in his voice along with a gaze or glare to get the message across. As his role as VP he will do anything and approve of the idea's as long it bring profit to the club.

He careful schemes are due to thriftiness then greed , it tale lots of fund to cater to Tamaki extravagant and very expense ideas. He ruthless and unapologetically.

History:

Kyouya Ootori, a second year student at Ouran Academy, is the sly and calculating vice-president of the Host Club founded by his best friend and polar opposite, Tamaki Suoh.

Despite Tamaki being president, Kyouya truly runs the club and plays the role of a puppet-master behind the scenes, earning him the nickname “Shadow King”. He takes care of the Host Club’s expenses and will even sell items belonging to the host club members (such as Haruhi’s pencil) for profit.

In his words, “use whatever is at hand, be it friend or foe.” Almost everything he does is for his own benefit, but he can occasionally display a selfless side.

He is the third son of his very wealthy and influential family; thus, if he wants to take over his family's business, he must work extremely hard to meet his strict father’s high expectations. Also, Kyouya's bad temper when waking up in the morning has earned him the name “Low blood pressure Evil Lord

Controller's Information

Nickname: Peach
Age:27
Gender:Male
Seen the Anime?: Yes
How Did You Find Us?:SMU

Sample RP:
He soon saw a girl in canary yellow approach him, Her hair what a nice shade of brown and had the most lovely blue eyes.. Nodding he gave her a smile as he commented on her cute Tamaki pin on her left bosom. "I see you purchased one of the many fan pins I developed over the weekend, along with a few other things." he slid out the eBay book a catalog of some sorts, where he had all the stuff he sold on eBay. " May I interest you in other products of that nature."

He held a few picture book and a few rare pictures of the host some Photoshop by himself and the twins.. Some of the picture book was baby picture of Haruhi with he got from her dad, They to where Photoshop, to hide the fact she was a girl” So how about it girl can I interest you in these..?

He adjust his glasses on the bridge of his nose now why wait for the girls replies. After a few minutes the girls all agree. He smile looking to the black book, marking down all the money he making off these very few picture of the club. This made his day now the other thing was to figure out more idea on how to get profit for the club.

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[Whammy]

All right, here goes. I'm going to be pretty straightforward as there's very little to go off of.

1. Appearance - this isn't even a properly written appearance. I think it's best you go read the other apps to get a general idea of what should be included here . It should also be written in present-tense.

2. Personality - Not nearly long enough. Minimum for personality is 3 paragraphs. It says that in the Character Template thread. Therefore, this needs to be expanded.

4. History - good enough, though a suggestion would be to write it in your own words simply so you get some practice. Not required, however.

5. Run this thing through a spellchecker. There are NUMEROUS spelling errors that need to be fixed. Lots of incorrect word usage as well.

That's it for now. Good luck with your edits~

[peach]

ALRIGHT THAT SHOULD DO IT i HOPE

[Whammy]

Better in terms of expansion, yes, but there are still issues with it.

1. The first two paragraphs of appearance are... pointless. You're still describing Kyouya as from a roleplay-post standpoint than an actual description, so that needs to be fixed.

2. You need to run this through a spellchecker. Still.

[peach]

Done

[Whammy]

After further re-evaluation, this is the conclusion that the staff have come to regarding your roleplaying ability.

Please note that by accepting and abiding by our rules, you are also accepting and abiding by the standards set by our forum. While there are leniencies which we are able to grant, those leniences only extend so far simply because of the standards set out in our rules.

First order of business:

It has come to attention that you not only once, but twice, broke our rules. You were explicitly told not to copy from anywhere for anything except for the history. Despite that, you copied from a wiki the first time, but we were lenient.

However, after being told you were required to re-write the aforementioned copied portions, you failed to follow our rules and guidance and copied again, which was also a breach of our rules. Plagiarism in itself is a serious offence, and an offence which we will not tolerate. Nonetheless, you were let off once again and allowed to try.

Once we had informed you that you may not be able to reach our standards, you essentially threw the equivalent of a fit on the cbox, as well as making comments that implied that we were elitist. I will say this now: our standards are a part of our rules, and by not accepting the standards of our forum, you also did not accept the contents of our rules.

As a result and due to our re-evaluation of your profile, we feel that you are still not up to our roleplaying standards. While we do commend your efforts in working on a profile for our forum, we believe it is best that you find another forum more suited to your level. We wish you the best in your search efforts and are glad that you chose to apply to our forum.

Thank you.

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